I no longer use my old pen name because someone close to me learned of it, and I had to abandon it.

I began the novel "Revenge" three years ago under my old pseudonym, and have been writing the story on and off ever since.  Currently, I am posting chapters of it on my "Revenge" blog, which is solely focused on that novel.  Eventually, I will convert the "Revenge" blog into a private one, accessible via a one time payment, but, for now, it is open for all to read.

Come on over to my "Revenge" blog and read about Tory's exploits.  I've just posted the second chapter.  A link is available in my signature, below.

Hope you enjoy it.  Please feel free to give me feedback and ideas, suggestions and constructive criticism.

Take Care!

^Thanks!  Very kind of you!

By the way, I was just notified, this morning, that a default setting on the new blog was making it difficult for people to leave comments.  I believe I've fixed that and comments should be open for anyone to post.

Thank-you!  Very kind of you, sir.

I think it's important to hear what the characters are thinking, and get their point of view.  It's essential for us to understand Tory's thought process.  Why would someone who is such a strong-headed individual, and takes pride in using and discarding most men, suddenly transform her body for the pleasure of a man?  Here's a woman who took pride in being flatchested, and who ridiculed bosomy women as being stupid or *WOMAN*s (or both!), allowing herself to become busty all for the sake of a man.  Why would she do that?  Even with with her justification as to why she's doing it, there still has to be an inner mental battle going on about actually pumping herself up.  I find all of that fascinating, and as I post these first chapters of the novel, written a few years ago, I try to think: is her inner turmoil coming out for the reader?  I'm not sure, but I think that that inner struggle is hot as hell, and if I can capture it, then it works.

Why, thank-you, sir!  Most kind of you!

If you're referring to the seven part "Christmas Interlude" posted on my old blog for the Christmas 2014 season, I'm afraid you will have a long wait!  That segment of the story takes place when Tory is at her 10,000cc mark and about to go bigger.  Last week I just posted the second chapter from "Revenge"  where Tory is still a C-cup with 600cc implants!  It's going to take a while before we see her up to 10K, again.  But, I hope you'll enjoy the transformation and the trials and tribulations which Tory has to go through before she attains 10K.

Please post comments on my "Revenge" blog and let me know what you like from a chapter, what pushes your buttons, or what you felt didn't work.  Constructive criticism always welcome!

^Thanks so much for the kind words, sir!

Hopefully, Tory's internal monologue, as she considers her ever-expanding chest, will add to the eroticism.

I've just finished updating the Revenge blog with Chapter 3.  Hope you all enjoy it. 

Yeah, I kinda understand what you're saying.  I was thinking about her mindset, too, and how I sort of just give it a general overview, rather than describing specific situations she has to go through.  We will definitely get more descriptive fills as she gets bigger, but it may be a very nice idea to go back and flesh out this chapter both in terms of the fill descriptions and her experiences.  At the time I wrote it, I believe I was just eager to get her on to the bigger sizes.

Thanks so much for the feedback!  I'm gonna let this chapter sit on the backburner, for now, but I will definitely go back and flesh it out before going to the next draft.

You are quite right: there's a lot of stuff to explore here!

I have to pace myself because your writing is just insanely erotic. I adore this!

I want to see the experience on her way
the excitement at the fill ups

she is modifying her body, she see how the boobs inflate, how the skin gets tight maybe a little redish
her boobs growing every two weeks that is not normal (and i love it)
that is nothing every body do in there everyday life
she changing her human case that accompanied her her entire previous live and has shaped her character

you have to call that back into your mind

this is something lasting influence on her life

I really, really love your story's and the details and can't wait for the next chapter

and by the way:

HOW CAN YOU DARE TO STOP THE CHEAPTER IN A FILL UP!?!?!?!

I so: "ohhh yeah nice room, wow that is hot, a pump thats good, uhhh he will fill her implants even more... wait, what!?!? NOOOOOOO"

end of the cheapter

I'm so glad you like it.  Thanks for kind words!